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On Fanfiction, Shards of Honor (Vorkosigan Saga)

While I was reading some wank on fandom wank1 I found out that Shards of Honor, the first book in Lois McMaster Bujold’s major SF-award winning series, actually started out a long time ago as a Star Trek fanfic.

You can kind of see, in the first few pages, the skeleton of a Star Fleet officer and a Klingon warlord Meeting Cute2, but it’s actually good. I can see it now, and remembered thinking about Aral as “wow, I’m observing a Proud Warrior Race Guy in the wild.” Yet the “file numbers”3 had been filed off so well that I could only see the fanfic skeleton when someone mentioned it.

And shortly after the introduction of the two main characters, the story quickly veered away from “Starfleet and Klingon” and took its own course, with some vestiges here and there. And the entire saga after the first book definitely went its own original course; no more fanfic skeleton, or if there is, it’s been completely disassembled. It gained wings it never would have as a Star Trek fic.

Which just goes to show that (a) fanfiction can be good, (b) but original fiction can be much better.

So many people forget (a). Many fanfic writers forget (b).

  1. The type of wank currently featured on top is part of an entire tag/category: “writers are often pompous douches.” []
  2. Tropes are neither good nor bad; it depends on how the creator handles them. This is one that can easily be handled in a mediocre or boring way. []
  3. File numbers: original characters you’re either using directly or as very obvious expys. []

Review at Tor.com: Federations

Federations

To boldly go where none have gone before.

To explore new worlds and encounter new civilizations.

To war, love, hate, seek justice and make peace in the depths of space and on the fringes of time.

Also, there is a hamster.

These are the stories of Federations, edited by John Joseph Adams and written by 23 writers.

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